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This I Promise You

This I promise you,

to always love, honor and cherish you

through the fights we have had

even when we are sad or mad

I'll never give up on you.



This I promise you,

to always have deep and true feelings for you

remembering the times I felt loved

when I knew you were sent to me from up above

remembering when you made me laugh

I'll always smile at the times we both had.



This I promise you,

to never give up on a love so true

to see that I'm the one meant for you

we are not one, but forever two

I will always be in love with you.



This I promise you,

you will always be the one for me

if I ever forget this,

don't forget to make me see.



This I promise you,

I will always love, honor, and cherish you

until the day we die

I will always remember the day we met

when you looked deeply into my eyes.



This I promise you,

I'll never give up on a love so true

we are two soul-mates in love

I could never get enough of you.



This I promise you,

all these words for you come from my heart

I only hope you believe what I say;

you and I could never fall apart

deep in my heart I know I can't have no other but you

we are forever two

I'll always love you.

Author notes

written to someone ive been in love with for 2 and a half years.

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Comments

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    March 12
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    Aww this was such a beautifully
    written love poem with such tender
    thoughts and passion. I know what it's
    like to feel like this, and it is such a
    wonderful feeling.

    Vows mean a lot, and i'm sure to whomever
    you wrote this poem for, means alot to them
    as well.

    Thanks for sharing & best of luck


  • SincerelyMegan
    September 13, 2008
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    This poem is definitely starting to grow on me


  • willowprincess
    May 30, 2008
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    so very sweet. a beautiful vow.
    great job!


  • SincerelyMegan
    May 13, 2008
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    This is so sweet.
    I loved the last couplet.


  • SilverMoonFeathers
    May 9, 2008
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    Such a sweet poem good luck in my contest!


  • ChristieLove
    May 7, 2008

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    Very sweet poem Thanks for entering the contest, Good luck!!
    ~Natalie and Dimitri~

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