So take my perfection and change it,
rip me apart and sew me together,
whatever pleases you.
Tear my wings off
and cut out my eyes,
bind me with chains if it makes you happy.
Ignore my screams of anguish,
ignore the things that make me, me.
Because I'll forever only be what you want me to be.
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Society -kills- me
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Be harsh, be specific.
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the ending confused me. besides that this was a great societal take on the pic. soooo fitting!! thanks for sharing and for your entry!!
*Rianna
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Which part of the ending? The very last line is kind of the.. Giving up? Stating that they stopped fighting. I actually think I should have ended it before the last line.
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it's clear now!!!
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This is a great take... As I said to someone else, I love the word 'anguish'. It's just one of those words that resonates within the core of emotion and sticks with you hours after you're done reading. Well done, and good luck!
Laura
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Now here is a good take...excellent..All the best !
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