As I listen to you breathe
A calm washes over me
Because I know one day I'll be your wife
You are the love of my life
Every minute we are apart
Eats and tears at my heart
But I know one day we'll be together
And then we'll make every second last forever
We'll share the good times and the bad
But I will never allow you to be sad
We'll sleep in each others arms throughout the night
And awaken close together in the morning light
I'll lie looking deep into your eyes
And we'll sleep under the dark night skies
You are my one and only
With me you shall never be lonely
And yes baby I know you are in love with me
And that one day we will start our own family
Author notes
Option #3
I wrote it while I listened to him breathing... he fell asleep on me. but now I've got this so, yay!
A contest entry
- What About Love? by GypsyEyes.
500 points, ended July 30, 2008, 132 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Everybody Loves Somebody by CatQueen248.
450 points, ended August 3, 2008, 31 entries
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You've taken some thoughts I've had and put them on paper. I can close my eyes and imagine this, thanks for the smile....beautifully written.
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5 RAJ
Hmn...A love dream comes near to fulfill the true sense....Now going through your works, it seems that you are a good artist...
Good work Sarah...
Namaste...
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Aww...this was such a sweet poem. Thank you for entering my contest.
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very good poem i loved it.you really have expressed yourself in this poem and i wish u the best of luck in all of you love and this relationship..it will all work and this will be true...great write i hope to read more and soon so keep writing and i will keep reading...
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Aww this is so sweet! you did such a wonderful job in expressing yourself and how you feel about Brother mine..lol... I really loved this.. It was so heartfelt..Beautifully done!!!
Angel
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Aaaawww indeedy hehe. Anyone who receives this would be in danger of falling in love with you hehe.
Beautiful hun x -
awwww...
me loved it!!!!!!
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