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The Cycle

flies sleeping soundly
in spider woven hammocks
evening's final feast

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  • sheltered
    May 9, 2008
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    Excellent image of life and death.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 5, 2008
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    Love it! This is so cool.. such a brilliant Haiku...


  • DogFish silver member
    May 4, 2008
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    LUGUBRIOUS !

    pity you not your sorry state
    your loss improves anothers fate