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Love Kills

Northern lights can't save you tonight, boy. Broken hearts are famous, play a new tune. It's a candy-coated cover-up the way you're going to leave me. I've played this game before && ended up the the last man standing in a sea of crushed hopes.

You consume me.

I hate those three small words almost as much as I love the look in your eyes when you say them. Brush my hair back && tell me that this is forever. I swear I'll believe you.
Let's be cute && awkward together. Hold hands, stand face-to-face, hip-to-hip in front of all those girls who are so in love with you. Lets make such a scene that they'll be talking about it for years to come. We could be the kind of couple that every kids longs to be. I've got bruises on my thighs from your wandering hands. My claims been staked && come hell or high water, they'll never remove the outline of my body from your heart.

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I wrote this about two weeks before my boyfriend decided to dump me

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  • kirsten.
    May 5, 2008

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    Wow. It's beautiful.

    I've got bruises on my thighs from your wandering hands.

    I love it.

    <3