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Come take a look

Come take a look
At my perspective
Let me console you
With this directive
Learn lessons
Of introspective
Discriminate not
I am subjective

Come take a look
At what I see
Through these poets eyes
Beyond the debris.
How they decriminalize!
The inequality
When they deem fit
Let me tell you
Freedom won’t quit

Please tell me what you think

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  • Stoneface Gremlin
    May 11, 2008

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    Pretty cool

    This is a really good poem. I could see it as being the beginning of a series of poems arranged into a book. The book would be a certain number of poems hand selected by you to describe who you are or at least share the uniqueness of your view of the world. I won't break down this poem as it is complete and a single entity. There is nothing I could critique. I can only offer praise for it.