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Break me, while you betray me.

I'm hurting so much,
I wish to stop breathing.
I was there for her first.
And she shunned me out.
And I feel as if my heart will stop.
I thought we were friends.
But I was wrong.
So just let me go,
Don't play around.
You've betrayed me so.
I thought we were friends,
But once again...
I was wrong.
So just let me go,
Lat my blood start to flow,
As I collapse on the ground
From the tears that have fallen.
But I still want you to understand,
I'm still here.
Even if you don't need me,
Even if I'm just here for when you get bored.
I'll stay...right here,
While you betray me.

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  • Snow White Queen
    May 8, 2008

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    Wow, my favorite part was:Lat my blood start to flow,
    As I collapse on the ground
    From the tears that have fallen.
    But I still want you to understand,
    I'm still here.
    Beautiful!


  • lovemedeath
    May 8, 2008
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    wow i know how u feel in this poem ........but great job