I'm hurting so much,
I wish to stop breathing.
I was there for her first.
And she shunned me out.
And I feel as if my heart will stop.
I thought we were friends.
But I was wrong.
So just let me go,
Don't play around.
You've betrayed me so.
I thought we were friends,
But once again...
I was wrong.
So just let me go,
Lat my blood start to flow,
As I collapse on the ground
From the tears that have fallen.
But I still want you to understand,
I'm still here.
Even if you don't need me,
Even if I'm just here for when you get bored.
I'll stay...right here,
While you betray me.
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Comments
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Wow, my favorite part was:Lat my blood start to flow,
As I collapse on the ground
From the tears that have fallen.
But I still want you to understand,
I'm still here.
Beautiful!


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wow i know how u feel in this poem ........but great job


