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Wishing

Whishing from a distance
Seeing him like me
Hope to cross the abyss
seperating him from me

Try as I might
I just can't span this divide
Try as I might
He stays jusst within sight

I wish that he
Could meat me half way
I wish that he
Could help split the fray.

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  • trinajean
    May 11, 2008
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    You connected really well with the picture. I could see it in your poem. I loved this piece!