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Bubbles filled with love...

Millions of bubbles
all colors and shapes
Some are like kitty cats,
some are like apes

Floating with butterflies
on bubble gum air
Watch if they pop
for they'll stick

in

    your

          hair!

P
  O
    P!

Millions of smiles
and hugs and big kisses
for one special girl
who's our Sunshine Princess!

on

    your

          cheek!

S
  m
    a
      c
        k!

Author notes

To my precious Sunshine Princess from her Grandma Melodies.

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Comments

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  • slick99
    August 9

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    awwwwwww. i bet Sunshine Princess loved this!!! you are a very good poet!!!

  • Rovingone gold member
    May 17

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    I like the millions of smiles, hugs and big kisses,forone special girl, who's our Sunshine Princess, best of all. Cute ending too!

  • Psycho Dancer ---
    May 8

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    i really love the way it starts, my favourites lines are, 'floating with butterflies, on bubble gum air...' the first part flows really well - i just love your imagination !

    the end bit [from 'on your cheek] is creative, but i may be reading it wrong, but somehow i can't get it to flow right

    overall, another delightfully imaginative piece :]



  • Psycho Dancer ---
    May 8
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  • LittleAnn
    May 6

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    You are so cute... Oh well, your poem is...
    Heck, you know what I mean...

    I would ask you to also be my grandma, but you're not much older than my mom... And if I asked you to be my AP mom, you'd be number three... and that wouldn't be quite all right!

    I could only ask you to be my friend... But you are already... (At least I hope so )

    So yeah, that's me, you see? -->

    Annie


  • Yemassee silver member
    May 5

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    Ah you're an AP grandma, congratulations you're old!

    I have a couple AP kids but they disowned me, both left AP, lol.

    It's a cute poem, I see all those funny shaped bubbles in my head...Moxie bubbles of course!

  • Sunshine Princess silver member
    May 5

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    Oh grandma I love you and I love my poem thank you very much for writing for meI hope that you have a very nice day today

  • Puppydog gold member
    May 5

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    THIS IS JUST THE SWEETEST!!!!

    Your lighthearted words will definitely bring a smile to her and put a warm feeling in her heart! 's


  • Amera gold member
    May 5

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    This is delightful! It reminds me of my mom giving me a bath when I was little. She used to play games with the suds.

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    May 5
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    Forgot your clapies

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    May 5

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    Oh I love this it is great She will adore it you are just amazing I hope that you are having a great day

  • Kiran silver member
    May 5

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    This is so cute!!! A beautiful poem, fun and gorgeous to read!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    May 5
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    Aaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww!!!


  • aliceramone silver member
    May 4
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    lol...ah, your sunshine princess is lucky to have a grandma like you...so cute.

  • individuality gold member
    May 4

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    hehehe this makes me think of those bubble things we used to get as kids we kept the bottles and used washing up liquid


  • luna-midnight gold member
    May 4

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    awwww this is abs beautiful, and so lovely, and a great fow
    she is going to love this, its great
    awww
    (im so happy to read these enteries)
    great job and take care
    stephanie

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