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Falling For Your Lies

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She never really got it,

not the way I do,

Because love had her blindfolded,

And when she tripped, she stumbled back on.

 

She never really noticed,

that she hated to love him,

that she loved to hate him,

She was so damned over lies.

 

Walking the road that so many fail to concieve,

she stumbled and crawled...

With his beautiful lies,

he sold her again.... ♥

 

She noticed when she was already far off the edge,

When she felt herself clinging from the eave of solace,

When everything he tried to paint in pink,

Converted into a shattering and macabre world....

 

She's now conviced that he sold her the sweetest lies of all,

After seeing her fall and shatter,

He had the nerve to repeat again,

the one constant lie.

I love you♥

Author notes

OPTION 2
QUOTE G: You sell me the sweetest lies, with all your, I LOVE YOU'S
by: XXVampireeyesXX

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  • piccola
    June 3, 2008
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    this is great. thank you for entering


  • TheQuietStorm
    June 2, 2008

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    wow this is very good! i love the thate to love love to hate lines! hank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox


  • Poesing
    May 19, 2008

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    perfectly fits the picture prompt - I believe the spelling could be improved upon a tad, but other than that - very heartfelt!

  • Judith Chandler
    May 15, 2008

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    Sadly true. Isn't it amazing and awful how men can mess us about. I like the lines about hating to love him and loving to hate him. It's really hard to rid your mind and heart of this sort of man.

    Well written too.


  • endless-lover silver member
    May 14, 2008

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    loved the poem doll.
    i really loved the start then to me it got to where it was amazing to good then back to amazing! great work you have here wish you the best in the contest and keep up the great work.


  • xCandieKissesx
    May 14, 2008

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    Omg!! AMAZING!!!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!! Just like FaeryMouse. The imagery was fantastic and the pic is so beautiful. STELLAR!!! Thanks for entering and god luck!

    + Jackie


  • FaeryMouse
    May 6, 2008
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    Girl,You did it again..beautiful write..LOVE LOVE LOVE IT


  • voodoo ink silver member
    May 5, 2008
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    Nicely written inspiration from the quote, poet....thank you for the entry in the contest...


  • Lil-Bit Crazy silver member
    May 5, 2008

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    wow just wow.... great write... welll done... and good luck in contest....... a winner in my books... thanks for sharing this with us... hugs

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