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Darker rainbows then black

she was nice enough to never say she loved me but once
but she wanted me to say i love her
cause afer i said it i was hugged to death
and she told me later
she was expecting me to say it
and now she doesnt even care
she even asked me to show her what real love was like
calling it black rainbows
and me her ownself the light

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  • La Tua Cantante
    May 14, 2008

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    This is beautiful. My favorite part is:
    "calling it black rainbows
    and me her ownself the light"

    I can really relate to someone wanting something, and then when you finally give it to them, they act like it's nothing, or break your heart. Amazing write dear.