I'm the type of girl, that puts her heart out on the line.
But when it gets broken into thousands of shards, I'm a lot less than fine.
I cannot cope with the pain,
my mind goes over our conversations, I feel so insane.
Everything that you say to me, I analyse time after time,
Finding hidden meanings, or is it all just a charade or a mime?
I blurt things out, don't think of the aftermath,
Words just spill out, like a word poison bath.
Tears of regret are flooding my heart,
Love is just a feeling, or an unfinished work of art?
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mhari
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A contest entry
- I'm the kind of girl/boy who.....(easy, creative, fun) by Stormy Sky.
400 points, ended June 3, 2008, 24 entries
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Has anyone else ever felt this way?
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thats well ace miss Mhari!
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Tears of regret are flooding my heart,
Love is just a feeling, or an unfinished work of art?
i love these two lines. a very powerful way to end the poem. the rhyming wasn't forced, so that was a nice touch. good write and good luck.
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