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You should not do it

Sometimes people say things that should'nt be heard
and it can make people feel bad inside
that's why some people call them a curse word
I wont use curse words it's what I decide
to me those types of words are not preffered
there are better ways to talk if we tried

Talking nice to others is kind to do
because it's just not nice to be mean
you would hurt if bad stuff was said to you
so we should not say things that are obscene
you can hurt ones feelings and that is true
that's why saying bad things should'nt be routine

So next time you think of something not kind
I hope you give it thought and change your mind

Author notes

Ten syllables per line, 14 lines, and the poem must rhyme a certain way at the ends of the lines

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  • blondone
    May 20, 2008

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    This is the truth in a nut shell for sure words hurt more then we know somethings should be left unsaid

    the words flow with ease a real nicw write with a strong message thank you for entering

  • blondone
    May 4, 2008
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    Your prompt will be: A Curse
    take this wherever you want and good luck