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Shhh...

Shhh...Shhh...
Choking beauty,
Drowned in blood,
The tears will flood,
If you don't...
Shhh...

A contest entry

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  • Pollycheck
    May 25, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my short poems contest. This is an interseting write. It was also quite thought provoking.

  • phoenixonfire
    May 8, 2008

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    Straightforward and very deep! There is so much movement in this poem! Well done! thanks for entering and good luck!
    Pri


  • ucancallmereal
    May 4, 2008
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    woahhhhhhhh is all i can say