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Lightning (Acrostic)

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Looming destiny approaches
In ominous billows of obscurity, as
Gusts of winds awaken the weeping willows to
Heighten their limbs
Tempest pellets of heaven’s tears, pour with
Nature’s fury against a scorched earth; whilst
Illuminating streaks of iridescent rage flash with
Numerous thundering proclamations, that
Godly wonder is at hand

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

My Prompt: Lightning
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pic credit:
http://www.longmont.com.au/files/photos/tmp/7_Lightning_Protection_1.jpgw475h358.

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  • blondone silver member
    May 19

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    Now this is beautiful full of outstanding imagery I love this form and you have written it with ease the words flow with grandstand sites, lightning has came to life with these words... its just beautiful thank you for entering


    • jasminerose gold member
      May 27
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      It was completey my pleasure to enter and I am honored that you thought so highly of my entry!! A very enjoyable contest!!
      Thank you for the lovely comment and for hosting!!!
      Jasminerose

  • hahakindaguy
    May 17
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    Fantastic visualization and flow, flawless


  • NeonRose silver member
    May 11
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    Wonderful use of imagery and good Acrostic flow. I like this a lot!


  • Room without doors silver member
    May 7

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    Outstanding

    This poem is full of rich imagery that brings the lightning alive in front of our eyes. I can imagine an angry storm taking hold. I loved the metaphors and the over-all flow. Best of luck in the contest.


  • poppa silver member
    May 5

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    Wow...day of reckoning indeed....love the pic and your words truly enhance it...good luck...



  • blondone silver member
    May 4
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    Your prompt is: Lightning
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