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~Valued Antiquities~

Missing image

Antique Petals,
frozen in time,
the warmth of blood,
pulsating through pain,
filling hearts with,
spiritual glows.

Illuminating lights
and healing touches,
beacon through.
Antiquities of words
merged in stone,
salvation's gates open,
echoing in sanctuary.

Songs of yesterday;
mere memories of day's past,
absolution's cleansing touch,
as angel's harpsichord's,
create divine melodies.

Lifted to a higher divide;
powered testaments filling a void,
mere words cataloged artistically,
filling vessel's full of hope,

through storms casualties. 

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  • Nevel
    May 7

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    Beautiful done! I like your choice of words, the whole imagery breathe something peacefully...


  • ShelleyA gold member
    May 5

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    A lovely write. Heartfelt. Deep expression of emotion. Very nice metaphor. Good flow and tone. Nice imagery. Good word choice, alliteration and assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest.

  • beautiful write good luck.


  • imahealer
    May 4

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    Excellent take on the image. Title appropriate for deep content. Last stanza sums up beautifully all the your muse saw inside. Next to last stanza, full of beautiful metaphors. Creativity, superb. Best wishes my dear friend.
    Love, Shana

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