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From the Bald Mod Guy

Houses were her fascination,

So I used imagination.

I wrote the his’try I could see,

The his’try that they spoke to me.

I helped with problems at AP,

And then she wrote a poem ‘bout me.

She said that I was old and bald,

But I still answered when she called.

We kid sometimes that she’s annoying,

But her friendship I’m enjoying.

Those prior lines are irony,

And also they’re BAD poetry.

This final stanza holds the theme,

The words that I would like to scream,

The words that go to you from me,

So HAPPY BIRDAY JeannieD!

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Not sure how long I've known Jeannie now but have enjoyed every minute of it. From entering her contests, to chatting, to answering her pleas for help I've been fortunate to know her.

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  • Malzy
    September 16, 2008
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    Hey!!
    Another example of what a wonderful guy you are. Youre just a big lovable Poppy! But onlt I could call you poppy ok?
    Ive always looked up to you as to how you can put together just beautiful poems that have some meaning to them. Im sure shes happy you wrote a beautiful poem for her birthday.


    Malzy


  • Dancing Feather gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    lol Bald Mod Guy? wow thats a new one anyways nice dedication to her


  • Patpowers silver member
    May 17, 2008
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    What a nice dedication for her! BRILLIANT JOB MY FRIEND! THANKS!!!


  • Dienush
    May 6, 2008

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    This is such a sweet dedication to her And funny


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    May 6, 2008

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    Oh sweet!!! Did I say bald?? You are the bestest! I am SO honored to receive this wonderfully delightful birthday poem from you!! Thank you so much. You have definitely brought a smile to my face and heart.


  • DarkHunter
    May 6, 2008

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    Thank you kirbysman for this fun entry, I know this will make Jeannie laugh!

    Thank you for joining the party


  • Veronica Leigh
    May 6, 2008
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    wow. haha this is cute

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