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never thought

i never thought that i would be crying over you
i thought that we would live happily ever after
but my fairy tale ending was cut short
you would be on my mind day and night
every work that came out of my mouth was Dan thin and Dan that
now everytime i think of you makes me want to cry
you were the guy i thought would go far
but i never thought that you would leave me in the dust
now i know what heart broken feels like
and it sucks.....(so sad)

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  • Stormy Sky
    May 5, 2008
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    please put your SN and option number in the comments.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    May 4, 2008

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    ah..very sad..but this is what the life is..I can see the pain in the words and ..you are very touching while describing the truth...


  • InRegardsToMyself
    May 4, 2008

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    Great job with this...
    I can relate to this one so much, every word can just break your heart...great emotion...
    Fantastic job!