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Even the Heffalumps Know

 

 

 Of you

  elephants find

 jealousy from cages:

You're free, child! New to you,

  clean ivory!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

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    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression? • Line numbers
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Comments


  • blondone silver member
    May 19
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    Open to interpretation for sure a very indepth write I am going to say the ivory and elephants is a clever take on the prompt now the title got me ... I am not sure what a heffalump is a heffer is a female cow does this relate ??? either or I really like thios write grand imagery thank you for entering


  • NeonRose silver member
    May 11
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    Interesting write.. opem to interpretation.


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    May 7
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    This rather appeals to me.

  • blondone silver member
    May 4
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    Your prompt is: The color Ivory
    Take it wherever you wish...