There you are
You aren't far
Crazy about you
Do you feel this way, too?
See you at school
I see you in town
Dont want to look like a fool
But, I feel like a clown
I love your face
I love your body
With your lovely pace
I shall tell nobody
Im crazy about you
Really I am
This feeling is anew
Looking at you I say God Damn!
Laziness thrives
Passion re-enters my soul
My heart... survives
The message was sent on an ancient scroll
The love in the air
Is discretly rare
Relationships fallen
Like leaves on a tree
Laziness open... but ideas come to thee
Come over for tea
Shall we expiriment with emotions
With the wings of love
Soaring high, high above
Through the many deep blue oceans
Seeing you in the temple of Harmony
The main attraction
My love, do with distraction
My heart gives to you, with more than a fraction
With my words; bizarre
In my mind a you aren't far
In life, miles a way
Driving away from the emptiness in my heart
But wait...
Knock, knock on the door
Is it the man, with the mystery crate
No! tis you at the door
I see you more
No goodbyes I see
My heart, now, with glee
I cant bottle the words amagined to tell you something so simple
I love you
A contest entry
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Comments
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This is romantic, thanks for your entry...lol
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sorry..Im a lil' cranky right now..this is too sappy for me right now..thanks for the effort though..sarah
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this is old school, new school remix, home fries!!!
it is sweet as ass candy, kido.
great write, is it about yo little old lady?
that is cute young love, on the streets.
kick "n" it old school,
GRANDMA
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Actually No...
Its not about my for now, X... lol
Someone else, If you come over this weekend for the party...I might tell you, or you can wait and see if we date... I really like her...
Peace+Love!
Jake!!!
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ok, this poem seemed to be a bit disorganized. one minute, i felt like i was in Roman times, the next in modern day Chicago. it was a bit confusing. lovely emotions though, and a wonderful ending. very nice work. thank you for entering!
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When you thought you were in roman times, you were probally refering to when I was AMAGINING her in the temple of harmony, hence the amagining part...
Peace+Love!
Jake!!!
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