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Circumnavigation

 

If atoms spin round aeons' afterglow       
pass preview, present, future, recombined,
to causal layers add effective flow         
cue tune to harmonies, runes realigned,   
then what spells last beyond an augenblick
beyond beyond yet stay within within,     
to spell out waft/weave linking thin and thick
as means to ends, through which ends' means begin.
What shadow seems, what light beam seams unzip,
is figment of imagination or                  
insight into eve's apple's core, skin, pip     
to link past futures, those still still before 

the universal orbit spun vibration            
prepares for former circumnavigation ...   

Author notes

Spontaneous responsum to
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2068804
House Dust

augenblick - German : blink
eve - both Eve and eve
Background
http://flickr.com/photos/anua22a/2288452186/sizes/o/

1 animation
http://flickr.com/photos/70869712@N00/2180725266/


2 animation Santarosa (link only)
http://flickr.com/photos/santarosa/69783593/sizes/o/in/set-72157600286229016/

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  • Superb

    Another most excellent write, with an elegant backgroud which I absolutely love. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Hope you had a good 4th, my friend.

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  • With all due respect to Xqzt, I am glad you alerted me to this by IM, because I can't read it against the background JR, thank you very much for the tribute of an excellent and imaginative responsum.

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  • Xqzt
    May 4

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    Beautiful

    Thankyou for using my Crystal Whorls fractal as wallpaper here.
    It really works well and suits the content.