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Forgotten Heart

Hearts shattered
Bits and pieces

Swept away
Buried in the darkness

Out of site, out of mind
Forgotten in one day

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  • HaleyMary
    May 10, 2008

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    Powerful write. This expressed deep emotion. Hearts and love can be a fragile thing. The ending was especially powerful. It makes me think of how a broken heart can make a person feel sad about love and it's worse when others have moved on when the person still hurting has been forgotten. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.


  • ckwriter69
    May 6, 2008

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    Mmmm very strong write with only six lines. This has a lot to say. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.