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The Box

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The box was wrapped in golden foil

and tied with a big red bow

I was excited when I opened it

the contents I did not know

 

It was filled with high hopes

                           and many wishes

the answer to my dreams

I put the hopes in my mind

                      the wishes I set aside

I folded the golden foil paper

The big red bow, I left it tied

 

Time has moved on since

                            I received the box

some of my dreams came true

I now have little hope in my mind

and my wishes have diminished to few

 

I put the wishes in the empty box

along with the folded golden foil

I destroyed the big red ribbon

for time had made it soil

 

The box I put upon the shelf

with wishes still in tact

Someday when my dreams return

my hopes will then come back

 

 

 

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  • arafura gold member
    May 4, 2008

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    "The box I put upon the shelf
    with wishes still in tact
    Someday when my dreams return
    my hopes will then come back"

    Well done my friend! Good luck in the contest!




  • TwilightBloodRuns
    May 4, 2008

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    hmm, the rhyming scheme is a little over the shop.
    It is a good poem, but the scheme needs to be more constant to make a better poem.