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waiting

entering the naked site of
old warriors and silent
screams of violent death

girlish wings and pink bands
of sinful fear that all will
fail in life's rewards

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28 words

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  • whispernthedark silver member
    May 20

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    Great inspiration from the picture. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.

    ♥
    whisper

  • LadyDementia gold member
    May 8
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    Wow, powerful piece, goes so well with the pic, Beautifully penned, good luck


  • buffsab99 silver member
    May 4
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    Great

    This is a great take on this prompt. Beautifully written my friend. Best of luck in this contest