Scenes in the mind
constantly rewind.
Visions floating by
eclipsed by the sky.
Sentimental feelings
comes up every ending.
Revealing sensational
old time, square news.
Can't lose the memories
they are all I have.
Lost in compulsion's rays
warms me for many days.
Author notes
Prompt; "Play back"
A contest entry
- Quickie--Word prompt by Purush.
450 points, ended May 5, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Overlook made up words
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hi pat - i looked in before i logged in here and saw your beautiful boat race 
so nice to see what you look like 
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Great writting, those memories can keep us going for sure.
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I love to have a decent score of them hahaha
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a good poem, aye to the memories, they keep our feet firmly on the ground in mind so we can move forward with smiles
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Yes, you're my optimist, Ian hahahaha
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