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Perfect View

You know the secrets
of the night
You see it all
in your flight
The good, the bad
the ugly, too
Wise one, you
have the perfect view.

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A contest entry

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  • basilisk
    May 7, 2008
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    Nice take on the prompt!

    Concise, good flow. Nice work.


  • Topaze
    May 4, 2008

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    a very nicely written piece smooth flowing with a nice beat. Thank you for your fine entry in the contest.