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The devils offspring

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The Devils offspring with butterfly wings
watching devastation while she sings
A song of hate and Indiscretion
killing all is her profession
The devil pays in souls you see
The Devils offspring stares at me
Pretty demon, looks into my eyes
Then looks away to my surprise
a voice from inside my head
"Join your sister," is all it said

No confusion, no, none at all

my turn now to watch them fall.

The devils offspring, just we two

Watching devastation me and you

 

 

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picture is by elisafox (on flickr)
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  • CinfullyDelicious
    May 26
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    oh how creative love what you did with the pic.....awesome


    Cin


  • whispernthedark silver member
    May 20

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    I really like this interpretation of the picture. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.

    ♥
    whisper

  • LadyDementia gold member
    May 8

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    This is a wicked write, what a great thought, sitting and watching it...bliss Had an eerie feel to it, awesome! Good luck


  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 6
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    Oh good write here

    You captured the pic perfectly keep up the good work


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 6

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    Wow!! Great tale!! Both twins and devil's offspring.. this was fab Si


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    May 5

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    ooooh wow, awesome take
    best of luck

    Tasha


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    May 4

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    Wow thats heavy !
    What a punch line at the end of your poem
    Great write hun
    sis xx
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