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Scrumptious Buffet

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I am not a scatterbrain
yes I'm really smart
Can't waste my time scampering
Winter's about to start

You may scrutinize me
for my unique deeds
But while you're off hoarding nuts
I'm already fed and playing free

Some may call me a scoundrel
although they may be right
But eating from a smorgasbord
is  every squirrels delight

So forage and scramble
to your hearts content
I may be called scandalous
but have you had dinner yet?

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I hope this is alright I had fun writing it. The picture came from FreeFoto.com

Words used

Scatterbrain

Scandalous

Scamper-Scampering

Scorn

Scrutinize

Scoundrel

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  • And Nuts To You

    Haha. Great write Tawk. I enjoyed reading your poem. Congrats on winning the Silver Trophy. Boy, the little Sauirrel sure has been eating by looks of him.

  • ooh this was really fun to read great job with the word bank, Love it from start to finish.
    Warm thoughts.
    frozentearz

  • moonbumps silver member
    May 5

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    Got one of these - keeps arriving on the back fence to stuff his chops with nuts-the birds hardly get a look in- but Finty spots it and races down the garden barking like a demented banshee!
    Loved this. xxx Hilly

    • tawk gold member
      May 5
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      They can eat all your bird food lol but they are so cute too me! They are so curious about everything I just love to watch them playing. Thanks for your wonderful comments my friend

  • WolfHeart silver member
    May 4

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    Most excellent!!! Fun and rhyme is consistent, flow is great and this one is just superior!!
    One catch: But while your off hoarding nuts - should be you're as is you are... your is the possessive -
    But despite being a grammar grinder - this is funny, witty and I loved reading it all 8 times!!

    Love, Mom


    • tawk gold member
      May 4
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      Thanks mom I had so much fun writing for this word bank you should try if you have not already! Such fun words to work with. Thanks again for the wonderful comments I love you so.

  • Frogzter gold member
    May 4

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    Lol... this is so darn cute! I love it and you did a great job of incorporating the words from the bank. Nice to see an entry from you! I hope all is well!
    Thanks for entering and best wishes,

    Blessings,

    Frogz~

    • tawk gold member
      May 4
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      This was so much fun I loved all the words I wanted to use them all but did not want to make it to long. I have been ill and trying to get well. I have missed writing and reading Good luck with the contest and I hope you get many wonderful entries Theresa
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