i drank life from you
tasted your submission
and swallowed every last drop of shame
A contest entry
- One prompt.... by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended May 8, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Intense is the word here! So simple and yet so strong and open to interpretations! WOWIE! thanks for entering and good luck!
Pri
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had fun with this
a great contest, inspired some great writes,
thank you
and thanks for the honorable mention
zoe
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Whoa !
Wow, that is some take on the prompt!
"and swallowed every last drop of shame"
It sounds perfectly decadent! I loved the thought, it was totally outrageous! Bravo! Best wishes and God Bless!
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thanks for your appreciation and comment
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Hm... I like this poem. It has one thought - yet very developed in a few lines... Very vivid and descriptive, yet full of distinct emotion and pain.
Good write
Best of luck in your contest
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thanks for reading!
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