It seemed so perfect when I hid,
then big sis came and shut the lid.
She said she’d flush me down the pan;
told me to take it like a man!
My feet are stuck; can’t pull them out,
and no one comes, nor hears me shout.
Just wait until I get them free,
I’ll get my own back; just you see.
Big sis will find who’ll come off worst;
I’ll push her in this loo head first!
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A contest entry
- Make me laugh by Addicted to Rehab.
700 points, ended May 4, 10 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Funny and cute! Poor boy! Great take on the pic! I would never flush down my little sibling... but I'll keep it as a threat, just in case... lol. Congrats on the HM! Love your rhyme and everything.
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wow
hahahahahh
this did make me laugh and hard...
so good job
im the big sis so its sounds liek something i would do
hahahahh
aww but that poor litle kid
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Love it. The picture is a riot and your take is brilliant. Love the rhyming and the content from beginning to end. You clearly have a real talent for this stuff!!!
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very clever
this brought a big smile to my face. great writing great picture
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lol hilarious. It's great
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lol. This is hilarious- good job!
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lmao has me rolling ... best of luck in contest
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