Tell me really because I can't work it out
Are you Just Here To Save me, or are you a Real Superhero?
Everything you do seems to be for yourself
So that you can impress another girl
Is it all about the victory?
Tell me the truth because I'd love to know
Are you Just Here To Save me, or are you a Real Superhero?
Are you only saving me so you can impress me with your strong arms
Or is it because your a true superhero
What is it about for you?
Author notes
Dear Amanda thanks for holding this contest
A contest entry
- TITLES!!! by AutumnsFlame.
1142 points, ended June 5, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Good use of the title, but I don't know why you capitalized all of the words... I see that you fixed your spelling errors though, that's a plus. You could really use a lot more imagery in this too.... it was okay. Thank you for entering my contest.
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good work!
Great poem, but definitely go back and run through the spelling errors, one thing I've noticed is that people get caught up in spelling errors and miss out on the greatness of a poem, so a quick spell check would get your work to really shine!
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I think you used the title well in this poem. However, you should probably check your spelling. 3 errors I found:
Line 1 - "beacsue" should be "because".
Line 8 - "strenght" should be "strength".
Line 9 - "your" should be "you're".
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