Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Ninjas Attacked My Soul Today

 

How awesome

 

(to the fullest of the word-

we will never comprehend)

 

The day You sent you agents.

 

 

Invasion!

Recon!

...and my Self

was the opposition force.

 

The insurgency held as long as

I could,

 

but You and Your ninjas,

flinging love-tipped shirikens,

stood as no comparison

to what little my mind could muster.

 

What little can any mind's matter

Bring into being

That can skittle love!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Dear Amanda,

While only a metaphor, sometimes it does feel as if some outside force invades, huh?
These piece ended up more serious than I thought it was going to be...

In respect, love,
Justin Filizola

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • AutumnsFlame
    May 10, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Your words are powerful, but somehow I just wish there was more to this.... like it was really short and stuff and you have a good start here. Thank you for entering my contest!