I stand before still waters
my reflection runs so deep
Mistakes flow away with time
in my life they shall creep
I知 not asking you to understand
or to love me one more time
My life will repeat itself
the words all seem to rhyme
I知 not asking you to understand
all the crazy things I do
Can you feel the touch of my hand
that longs to love you
yes I long
so very long
to love you
I stand before this ocean blue
miles and miles of sea
And I know that I love you
and where I really long to be
I知 not asking you to understand
the man I turned out to be
Life just swept me away
I became to blind to see
I知 not asking you to understand
the sadness you see in my eyes
I never meant to hurt you love
shattered by the sound of your cries
I知 not asking you to understand
all the crazy things I do
Can you feel the touch of my hand
that longs to love you
yes I long
so very long
to love you
Author notes
My Version of James Blunt, song: Same Mistake
A contest entry
- Same Mistake by vanessa reen.
700 points, ended May 18, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is brilliant. I really loved reading through this. You have really done well here. All the best in the contest.




