I go to work each morning and try to do my best
To do what I am able and then ignore the rest
I'm happy when I'm working if they leave me alone
I've got so much to do there, I can't answer the phone.
When women work together, they are a special breed
They bicker at each other, intolerence indeed
I try to switch my mind off, although I'm one of them
I wish that they'd go hither, be replaced by all men.
A woman who has power can make anothers hell
It's true, what I am saying, for I've been there as well
A man is much more gentle, persuasive in his art
Besides I can be thinking that he is just a tart.
I go to work each morning to earn my daily bread
I rather be out shopping, there's lot to do instead
The lottery is looming, perhaps this time I'll win
For now I must stop dreaming, and let the day begin.
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600 points, ended May 19, 2008, 6 entries
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Very good, I enjoyed it. Its serious but entertainingly humorous. I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme and the flow is flawless. And I've noticed as well that working around alot of women at times can be way to dramatic for my taste.
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this has a very nice flow to it, and a nice sense of humor as well, thanks for entering and good luck
take care
stephanie
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this is so true about women working together..but we all have to earn our daily crust..good luck in the contest..xxx
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I have heard this to be so true about women. But all my life I work around & with guys. Some of them can be very sissyfied lol.
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Strangely, I'd prefer to work surrounded by women...
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