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Just heard

Missing image
Lying down,
perhaps grass,

above birds heading somewhere,

each sound
echoing
your "I Love You".

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

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  • perfectsunset
    May 6

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    This was so beautifully written with imagery spilling from each line. I like how you were inspired with the idea of love for this picture. Original thoughts.

    Thanks for entering & best of luck

  • Perception silver member
    May 4

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    Aw... how beautiful... I like how you used the birds....
    That really was a wonderful touch...
    Nice poem, and
    best of luck in your contest

    • crimsondew silver member
      May 4
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      I think you like birds too, just read a haiku of yours on them..
      thank you for your wishes...