A gruesome warmth
lazily
trickles
down
my listless
decadent
fingers
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.
.
in silence;
as i lick
your bittersweet
wounds
smiling ebullience...
A contest entry
- One prompt.... by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended May 8, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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love the wording! Very deep and beautiful...there is so much of style and emotion in this write! thanks for entering and good luck!
Pri
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Don't know what to say, I'm not very fond of adult poetry... yet I don't see any sadness here. Probably I'd enjoy being the "victim" of this one, as lust flows with peace, but... well.
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There is no sadness hence, the insouciance! I guess you just have to see the picture prompt to get it.
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