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gratuity is appreciated

Grabbing glasses by the bases
as to not disturb disinfectants
which once coursed over the brims
in a dishwasher ran by disabled.

A group of EMTs gather semi-circular
within the grasping of padded vinyls
as new, pea-green, yet without upkeep
have become yellowed before smoking ban.

Pronouncing orders of tomato-brisked clams
while mouthing teeth around crumbled biscuits
that four managers deemed necessary
be served free to help the business.

 

Starching scours back of neck-folds

from discount pull-over required to purchase

along with non-skid shoes, black uppers

as seen in safety first-day training manual.

 

The girls behind the salads

smile at the fumbling fingers

while they whisper about the new guy

who shaved his head the second day.

 

All this for pleasing hungry patrons

who insist on a greater treatment

than found in mundane cooking

inside the homes that they work for.

 



 

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Prompt:This Contest is built on an aspect of work. I only work for tips, so i thought it would be interesting to see people's views on work, getting paid, or a view on my pic. it's up to you

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  • LaPoetaSinLimites
    May 18, 2008

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    I keep needing to read all your work twice, its that awesome good job!

  • righteousme
    May 5, 2008

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    i liked this piece. i like the way you word things. and explain them out... thanks for sharing your work...


  • luna-midnight gold member
    May 4, 2008

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    awww this is an intresting and descriptive perspective
    thanks so much for entering, and take care
    stephanei