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Another Day in Hell

I do not work for love
or spiritual gain:
mostly what I do
is just a pain.

Five days a week
I lift my weary ass
and head for work;
more time in Hell to pass

before the weekend's freedom
and release--
two days in which
to find some peace.

I toil because I have no choice,
I need to eat;
to pay the rent and put
shoes on my aching feet.

Forget the propaganda
of the rich
whose hands are never soiled--
work's a bitch!

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  • Smirnoff Ice
    May 15, 2008

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    This is great Bill and very true great flow to this one that I am sure many can relate to lovely piece that worked well well done to you with this one


  • Keith
    May 4, 2008

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    I cannot do better here than quote Mark Twain:

    "Work consists of whatever a body is obliged to do. Play consists of whatever a body is not obliged to do."

    Well, it fills in the time between being born and dying, don't it?


  • WolfHeart
    May 4, 2008

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    Standing "O" - this is truth that is never put forth.
    If you don't have some sort of career you love, those working days can be endless and hateful. I did have a career and loved my job, but all the same, I had the same feelings sometimes. Great philosophy...

    Wolfie


  • secberm
    May 4, 2008

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    LOL. You definately have a way with words, my friend. Well done. Good luck and write on. One.

    Dez

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    May 4, 2008
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  • Bob Fox
    May 4, 2008

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    Lol

    Ain't that the truth. 37 years at the same job just got to me so I know the feeling. But done as always with class and excellence Bill


  • luna-midnight gold member
    May 4, 2008

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    lol. this has a pretty decent flow..but the last line is what made em giggle and go amen! lol
    great write and thanks for entering
    good luck
    take care
    stephanie =)


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    May 4, 2008
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    Right to the point!

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