It happened again
Another attack?
No, its not like that...
This is so much different
Its not like asthma,
Particles of dust and smoke dont bother me
But every breath courses through my lungs
Burning as eternal fire
It happened again
Its been so long since then
Everyone was worried this time...
They say I need to find the source
I dont think it could be found
To much of a random act
Its been like this since I can remember
But...it never lasted this long
It happened again
My body trying to wake me up?
Killing me from the inside out...
But it wasnt like that this time...just pain
Like always it went away
It didnt leave forever...I know it will be back
It left its mark again...forever a memory
This time Im lucky, last time it almost killed me...
Please tell me what you think
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well
I dont know If I like this one.
I mean its good but I dont like the thought of you being this person with so much pain. You are a very good person and one of My best friends even if we arent as close at we were before I wish you could just be happy and leave all this pain behind but its never like that is it?
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Well
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umm
i dont get it
but ok
can u tell me whats this about
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Beautiful Mystery
I like how this poem is hidden in a way. Where it gives little glimpses of what you're talking about but it's still to vague for anyone to know exactly what it's about, and yet in a way you can still connect with it on a deep level. I also like how the rhyme isn't constant it just pops in every little bit. Cool write, though I'd expect nothing less.
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