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Tonight is Important to Me

I’m doing suicide tonight
Nothing going to stop me
No one going to stop me

Oh-o oh no
Don’t miss me

If I die tonight
Would you miss me
In the Morning

If I die tonight
Would you cry all
Night long

Cause..

I’m doing suicide
Tonight
Nothing going to stop me

Not even your tears
Not going to stop me
Cause  I’m….

I’m doing suicide tonight
Nothing going to stop me
No one going to stop me

I’m dieing tonight
I wonder if you miss me
Or if you even cry a tear

I’m dieing right now
Fading from reality
Fading from your life

Don’t miss me…



Author notes

this is a song... i dont know if i made up the lyrics or heard it somewhere else, so if you know the song for like the part 'if i die tonight' which sound familiar to me but i can't remember just tell me... i am dieing to figure it out but any way it is very ruff and not at all close to being perfects so yea just go wit it

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Comments


  • Minos
    May 6, 2008
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    It's commit suicide, not "do suicide"
    the more you know


  • Sanity-of-Angels
    May 4, 2008

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    you've still got a long way to go with songwriting but the progression an the idea is a good one jus step back an take a look at what these words are meaning and not just saying and see what you can change