Locked up in my mind to wander
All these broken thoughts I ponder
Showing signs of needing a release
When my voice inside won't cease
I fold you up crease by crease
In the untouched box you go
I am friend and I am foe
I said yes but I meant no
All the things you did to me
I cannot be free
I stand defeated
Playing the soundtrack music sheeted
Echoing your words
A contest entry
- Tolerance and Child Abuse Prevention: Stop Child Abuse: May Contest by Page Shut down.
600 points, ended June 6, 2008, 21 entries
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Comments
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I really like this. It is beautiful. I kept having to read between the lines. Because it seems like there is some great hidden meaning in here. This truly is a work of art, and I appreciate it that you shared this.
Thanks for entering, and good luck!
-->pia♫♪
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All the things you did to me
I cannot be free
I stand defeated
Playing the soundtrack music sheeted
Echoing your words
It is hard to forgive and for get the hurt of abuse but the past does not eqaul the future thank you for entering the contest and good luck
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Strongly expressed, I confess I am a little confused by this but I do feel the emotions well
♥
Thank you & Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Fantasticly awesome!!
Hey TESS!!! I like it alot!!! Tis awesome!!
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I really get this. I wish you would have kept on but it reflects to the broken thoughts too. Nice
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