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Looking for a north star
In a blur of thoughts and dreams
In a instant my flow of time
Changed forever like a stream
No fireworks and no thunder
I was a mountain river
Falling over rocks and limbs
Not perceptively at first
Changing time and changing course
Drifting on a ocean of currents
Veering away from what I thought was certain
And finding a new place in a dream
That would direct me places
I had longed to go before






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  • Zoe2007
    May 11, 2008

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    Welldone . Keep up the writing .... I couldnt tell which catergry fell in , please make it clearer next time or in the author notes tell me which one . Thanks.