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Bright May

      “There are twelve months in all the year,

       As I hear many men say;

       But the merriest month in all the year

       It is the month of May.”

          from – “Robin and the Three Squires”

          (traditional English folk-song)

 

 

The fifth is the month of true waking,

   the month when the blessing of leaf

is laid on the woodland trees, breaking

   the frost and the long winter’s fief.

 

I’ll make you a gift of this morning,

   the warmth of the summer’s advance,

a ring of wildflowers for adorning

   your hair in the brash morris-dance!

 

The bouffons of spring are a-caper
   – I'll give you their mad galliard –
they dance for the love of the Shaper

   of all things, the God many-starred!

 

Sweet woman, the moments are rushing,

   and May is a brief picayune;

from hillsides the streamlets are gushing –

   a rash helter-skelter to June.

 

I’ll give you this moment to treasure,

   I’ll capture this spark of bright May,

I’ll lay it before you to pleasure

   your heart, when the clouds blight the day.

 

I’ll grant you the comic satori

   enlightening laughter can give –
the instant when life is a story,

   a joke, with a punch-line to live.

 

Sweet woman, whatever I proffer

   will pale before your gifts to me;

so make what you will of my offer –
   to free spirits all things are free.

 

 

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  • Candy6
    August 2, 2008
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    Great write


  • toomysterious
    May 17, 2008

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    Oh, this is so well-versed so eloquent, you have captured May in a tone from long ago and it makes me want to dance in the meadows.


  • myrataal silver member
    May 10, 2008

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    WONDROUS POEM!

    AAAAAH. How I loved this! So lovely, so really, really heartfelt. You are such a brilliant star, percious Mairi. You gave me the pleasure to read words linked like shimmering diamonds for the necklace of our Maa.

    Well deserved Gold!

    Love
    Myra


  • MargaretG
    May 6, 2008

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    This is heavenly and joyful imagery, and delightful verse. I love the references to dancing and the exuberance of nature in May, and the form is pure pleasure to read. Thank you for bringing this lovely gift to Marion's party.


  • maa gold member
    May 5, 2008

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    okay, now I have finished crying, as promised
    and finished sighing, too ...
    the tears have made place for a huge smile now ...
    and I am still waiting for it to turn into joyful laughter ...
    I already see it coming ...

    this is one of the most wonderful poems I have ever read - and received ... although you don't know maa for a long period of time - you know her essence dwelling in timelessness ...

    a poetic offering with transformational power - let's see how far it goes ... maybe I will laugh so much that there will be no more "me" left who laughs ...

    merci de tout mon coeur,

    marion


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      May 5, 2008

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      All I can say is that I am glad you like it, Marion.

      To think we might never have "met" on here, if I had not written "Jai Nataraja".

      • maa gold member
        May 5, 2008
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        yes, Lord Shiva has offered us the gift of friendship ...
        om namah shivaya


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    May 4, 2008

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  • Amera gold member
    May 4, 2008

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    A beautiful poem for a beautiful woman. As usual this is another world class poem from your quill. Your wonderful vocabulary sheds light and image with a plesent flow.

    Love,
    Amera


  • Lyndon gold member
    May 4, 2008

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    I am packing to leave

    but I must say that this poem, is sheer class. I would write for Maa but you have elegantly; scholastically; delightfully done it for two,perhaps three.
    There is so much depth in this 'gay' (in the old sense) poem. Lilt is the thing: rising rhythm with iambus; anapaest; anapaest in trimeters, 1, 2, 3!
    Lines A and C are masculine endings; B and D are feminine endings. I want to jig-a-jig to it.
    Epithets are refreshing and thoughtful: brash; many-starred; rash. The verbs are enticing: a-caper; to pleasure; blight. And nouns of careful thought: fief; "bouffons"; satori; picayune; helter-skelter.
    Rhythm, rhyme, diction, tone and approach to the theme provide a rich texture that Maa will surely tuck away for good!

    I have heard friends of mine say, what are you doing on a sub-standard site? Little do they know, Mairi.

    Fine wrist work on that there piece of willow.


    • myrataal silver member
      May 10, 2008
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      Packing to leave, dearest Ron?

      what do you say? No you cannot go ... How can you? No. Do not go.


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      May 4, 2008
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      If the outfield is fast, who's to say it won't reach the boundary.

      Thank you. Point your friends this way.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    May 4, 2008

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    And again I find myself gazing at the admiration of beautiful women for each other. Superb poem for a superb poet.

    Or in other words "Not bad"

  • ea silver member
    May 4, 2008

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    Happy Birthday to Marion!

    I'm sure she will love this! Have a lovely day, maa!


    • maa gold member
      May 5, 2008
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      for lady ea

      thank you, my dear marcy, for your sweet words ...
      especially for the birdie, the heart and the rose ...

      you're adorable ...


  • Melodies
    May 4, 2008

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    A happy poem, most certainly. It wears a pastel frock and is scented with lavender. Beautiful and charming... elegant and lovely!

    • Mairi bheag gold member
      May 4, 2008
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      You lie - it's naked, with its hair unkempt and awry!

      Thanks, Marilynn.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    May 4, 2008

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    Bravo my lady well penned. thanks for sharing.
    Wishing you all the best in the contest.

    Love
    Passions

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