We loved passionately
in heart's glowing
seasons
Now chilled touches
feel unfamiliar
Author notes
Prompt: Strangers touch, 12 words
In a list
A contest entry
- Super quick # 4 by Gypsy-Princess.
400 points, ended May 4, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Such a sad write. I can relate to this well. Congrats on the bronze!
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Wow
smoth transition of feelings here..Congrats on the bronze!
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Your grasp of politics is astonishing!
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How wonderfully strong in brevity...how sad it is that this happens so much, as love dies and we fall away from the one we once so desired...we are strange creatures, us humans...lol
Wonderful captured in depth and meaning in so few words...
Congrat's on another well desevred trophy...
Love,
sis
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Just nothing. . .
but perfect !!!
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Rings so loud of he truth I am almost deafened....I have been in a relationship like that...it ended much as you have described....great poem
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Congratulations on the well-deserved award--Well Done!
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Emotional
This tells of a couple that has sadly grown apart emotionally. I have been through this but my ending has become a beautiful friendship that i would not trade for anything in the world. Thank you for sharing this
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Thank you hun! I'm glad you grasped the full meaning of this.. a lot seem to think it's about a one night stand *scratches head* lol... but yes... it's about growing apart and becoming strangers.. I'm glad you remained friends!
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She is my deepest and best friend. The one person I trust in this world more than anyone
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One moment of ecstacy is often all that one has. To repeat it's urge can dismiss the joy of a one time only pleasure
Joe
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yup!
Familiar with this scenario! very good job with 12 deep meaning words. and congrats on the bronze!
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Congrats on the bronze!
Very nicely put....amazing how things can change in the blink of an eye. This has captured that so well, congrats on the bronze
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ow ...since when do you write sad..
Well done Jacks...I know that chilled touch only to well.
S
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This is such a lovely write, and so deep and emotional. I can relate to these words so much. well done and all the best for the contest.
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funny how things change in life huh. think you captured the prompt really well
congrats on the bronze too. you're getting a real collection of trophys arent ya 
well done
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really good mum
i love you
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Oh wow you make hearts glow AND have seasons? Clearly, you have a unique mind...
Good luck in the contest!!
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Deep sis, deep. I wasn't sure what I was doing on my poem. Just having fun I guess. Wishing you luck.
~Kystal Angel
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wow ~ deeply meaningful and grasping... x
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I really like where you took this. There are so many things that can change our touch to a feel .. and our feel to a touch. This is a lot deeper than quantity of words. An enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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Well
The passion of a one night stand can be delicious yet there maybe be an empty feeling afterwards if one does not take it for what it was... A time to enjoy the flesh
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