Left in ruins
In heart attack
There is no safe place
No comming back
Open, exposed
Her wound does flare
Nobody bothers to ask or care
She tells the truth
It stings to say
Her mum's reaction
Well, it doesn't play
Tears flow down her pretty face
She feels a right awful disgrace
In the shadows
Like a puppet I sit
Waiting to be through with it
I want to hold her
Calm all her fears
In my head
A monster rears
I look at my phone
Willing her call
Scared now
She won't want me at all
Distractions are fickle
But they can be fun
I get out my camera
Take photo's
One by one
The day almost closing
The night almost here
How I long
To hold her dear
Whisper in ears
That all is ok
I'm definately here
To always stay
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- MAKE ME FEEL by Cena-of-Destiny.
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Comments
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wow great. the rhyming is a bit stressed at times. like the mess. good luck in my contest!
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Lots of emotino and deep feeling in this poem.
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