Tis wonderful to be in love meant to last.
when you think of the time love is a miss cast
and we spend time trying to recover loss.
When we feel like we’ve lost our glamour and gloss.
Impure metals, dreams covered in dross.
Love is an old fur covered in moss.
But you brighten my reality.
Now I understand the things I see.
I see a future with you and me.
Things seem to be the way they should be.
So come my lover and take my hand.
We can waltz in love across the land.
On strands of life we’ll write our names in the sand.
I’ll promise my soul and give you a gold band.
So now I’ll forsake all lovers from my past.
Tis wonderful to be in love meant to last.
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A contest entry
- Prewrite Plethora by TheDemonEve.
1100 points, ended May 30, 65 entries
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425 points, ended July 23, 176 entries
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Comments
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The rhyming seemed forced in a few places and it really threw me off, but the emotional content was genuine, pure, and satisfying.
Best of luck and thanks for entering! -
So true, it's wonderful when we meet the one we are meant to be with forever. Wonderful rhyme and flow.
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