Sheltered in
redwood cupola
Seething soothing
hot tub in the forest
Windows open
to the shooting stars
White zinfandel in
styrofoam cups for safety
Bonfire fireflies ascend to the heavens
A contest entry
- BLOW MY MIND! by Tam.
700 points, ended May 7, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow. you are consistently amazing.
i see that i need to add you as a favorite now.
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nicely done!
love the bonfire fireflies ascending...
EXCELLENT...the final line is killer!
Thank you for sharing your time and talent with me! I’m delighted my three favorite things inspired your Muse...
Blessings! Tammy
p.s. the styrofoam cups for safety is WISE beyond words...LOL!
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your immagery and its scenario itself is very deeply touching the arena of the life..a wonderful piece indeed is here
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