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I'll Be Your Sweet Escape

I promise I'll be
your sweet escape;;

 

I'll take you away 

just when you think

all there is in the world is

         .p.

            .a.

                .i.   

                   .n.

 

& there's no good that can be found

 

I'll show you a ((better place))

where the sun

      is always shining

& the birds

      never stop singing

 

everything will be okay if you just remember

when everything in your life completely 

        f   

         a

            l

          l

           s

          

           a

             p

            a

              r

             t

 

& your world comes undone

 

grab ahold of my hand & have no fear,

                together we shall remain

 

we can escape as long as we [stick close]


for its our ♥love♥ that makes us

 

forever

 

    blind

 

          to

         

             the

 

                  pain

 

 

Author notes

oh yeah i came up with that by mehself arent you proud

be totally honest!

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  • good write..Love makes us blind to the pain, How true this is! If there were more love there would be less pain!

  • Im so glad you picked that title it is perfect! I knew it would work!
  • Awww

    This was such a cute and sweet poem! I loved the idea of someone providing an escape for somebody else.

    *for its our love that makes us
    forever blind to the pain*

    Those two lines really spoke to me and they ring with such truth!

    Great write. It's nice being able to read a positive and vivacious poem for a change.

    <3

  • Wow, this is such an interesting piece, but so understandable knowing what to look for.. >.<

  • This is indeed an intriguing piece to bring the love into the dimention of the life..this is a beautiful piece ..
  • I loved it the whole thing was my favorite part Awesome job! Told ya you a good writer hun!

  • wow this really shows how much you care about him awesome job and sweet write keep it up. oh and why are there question marks in between ill take you to a better place. and why is there one after that just asking. Very cool poem i loved the way you write.

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