Now and then I see you coming to me in shadows of a lustful moon
with wet lips that made me hunger and curvaceous body that moved me
into the songs and dances of love made in the dark of many nights.
How could I forget one like you sweet doppelganger from bygone days?
Your taught me the meaning of touch the spontaneity of lust.
The tingling of inner songs sung by the soul in the heat of passion.
You the prettiest of poppies
lollipop I savored with each lick
like a boy in a candy store
your memory sticks like sugar.
I will always love you deeply
for teaching the sweet sensations
Of touching another in passion.
Of touching skin against warm skin.
Of touching your beautiful soul.
You rocked my foundation crumbling me with sensations
I still feel today in my dreams,
Even now as I write this poem for you
I tremble.
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A contest entry
- Intense Emotion - PW Welcome by Heavens Child.
300 points, ended May 31, 41 entries
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Mmm wanna come lick me
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This was essentially a very sincere and honest poem, the eroticism deliciously understated, a poem about love and passion, lustrous and lusty, without ever being base.
Love the phrasing, 'spontaneity of lust', 'tingling of inner songs', 'in shadows of a lustful moon'.
Really nice work, best of luck in the contest.
PJ
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The ending knocked this out of the park. Delicate, lusty, and exquisite. My favourite verse was this: "You the prettiest of poppies
lollipop I savored with each lick
like a boy in a candy store
your memory sticks like sugar"
Great way to start off this contest. Well done!!
Best of luck and thanks for entering!
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Intense depth in this write of the sweet awakening of love and desire...made me remember many things that are so sweet! Loved this.
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This is stunning and very beautiful. It has great imagery, but is sensual in an emotional sense. Very well written. Best wishes and thank you for entering.
P.S. The only thing I wanted to suggest was to separate the lines, you are the prettiest of poppies and lollipop....it was the only part that felt a bit awkward to me.
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