I'm walking backward because I feel like it today.
People stop me to ask, why are you walking this way?
I just felt like doing it to them I say.
I must be on my way, I feel like walking backwards today.
I must be careful not to trip or fall,
and watch out not to run into a wall.
I cross the intersection with much care,
boy, do the people really stare.
I'm walking backwards because I feel like it today.
People stop me to ask, why are you walking this way?
I just felt like doing it to them I say.
I must be on my way, I feel like walking backwards today.
Author notes
Dear Amanda
This little poem was written just for you as something to tell you it's a good thing we're all different, because the world sure would be a boring place if we were all the same.
A contest entry
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1142 points, ended June 5, 2008, 27 entries
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Good job on reading the rules, and good job on this poem. I think you could've put more in-between the repeating lines though... Like I feel like this could've been longer... Thank you for entering my contest.
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Thank you for the nice comments. I'm sure I could have made it longer, but I believe it also would have gotten boring too. I enjoyed entering your contest though.
Cheryl
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I'm not going to DQ you yet, but I think you should read the rules a bit more carefully.
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lol.... funny.... why should we be the same as every one else... well done.... thanks for sharing.... hugs and love Linda xxxxxxxxxxx
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Thank You for the kind words. Very true if we were all the same the world would be very boring I would think. Thanks again.
Hugs and love,
Cheryl
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lmao!!! nice write ...
Good Luck
x cheeky x
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Thank you cheeky for the kind words.
Have a great day.
hugs, crafty
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